Senryu #11

Hi there! I've chosen you as the 63rd person for my 200 Comments Project Challenge. Basically I'm giving comments to 200 different people in a time frame within a week

Wow, very powerful imagery you have used here. I don't know why but when I read this I imagined a beast roaring in anger as he rises from the ground, seeking blood and wanting to feed upon some poor soul's flesh and bones. Very well written! ^^